 milladrive
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Date: April 5, 2003 @ 7:09 PM
Whoa, this sounds _much_ better. 
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 sinai
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Date: April 11, 2003 @ 10:40 PM
not usually my cup of tea, but itz cool, nice sweet melody...tha chill songz are good for ya every now and again...
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 RadioDead
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Date: April 20, 2003 @ 4:43 PM
sweetness weeee ^_^
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GeneHilbert
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Date: July 8, 2003 @ 5:23 PM
Pink Floyd'ish - kewl tune - vocal pitch & diction ok. The gtr. lead needs reworking - sounds like the intonations out a little. I have found out the hard way - playing with digital sequencers -
the intonation must be perfect.
No drums for this is kewl - maybe add some percussion at a later date. Kewl little tune. Good job - LATER
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 zique
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Date: July 11, 2003 @ 4:04 AM
Killer stuff.I like your songwriting.I think this is good.
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Rodrica
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Date: July 12, 2003 @ 5:39 PM
Yep, really enjoyed it. Nice piece of songwriting! Great sound, great melody, loved the guitar bridge.
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Rodrica
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Date: July 12, 2003 @ 5:40 PM
Yep, really enjoyed it. Nice piece of songwriting! Great sound, great melody, loved the guitar bridge.
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Apertome
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Date: July 16, 2003 @ 5:46 PM
Nice track! I agree it's Pink Floyd-ish ... but I hear drums, I like 'em, they could come up in the mix though. Some cool phased-out sounds in there
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Apertome
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Date: July 16, 2003 @ 5:47 PM
good vox too I might add
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 Svensta
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Date: July 20, 2003 @ 5:30 PM
Oh, I dig this one. I can definitely see where people mention the Floyd influence. This one is a keeper.
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VestigeMusic
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Date: July 29, 2003 @ 5:54 PM
Sweet track  The vocal effect works very well over the rhythm track. Gotta say your vocal style is brilliant for the tone of the song.
Good work!!  i'm checkin out more as I speak.
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winterchylde
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Date: July 31, 2003 @ 3:23 AM
This is a solid song. I like it.
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Pagan
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Date: August 3, 2003 @ 8:14 PM
i had a perfectly mastered copy of this song on a digital minidisc multitrack. and it malfuctioned and erased it along with a few songs that were almost perfect . i made one copy of this song with the bass turned up real loud for a freind of mine who was going to redo the bass part. that is this copy and theres no way to take that high bass out.it still depresses me.
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pixelmasochist
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Date: August 15, 2003 @ 7:26 AM
This is beutiful and the vocals are awesome. I really like this and I know a lot of peoples who would probably enjoy it too
It's a got a great feel despite gripes in the mix
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furiousBall
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Date: October 25, 2003 @ 11:30 PM
dig those strings, definitely dig your voice on this one, should post your lyrics - what i caught sounded great. bass had a couple of iffy timing spots, guitar solo is excellent, nice warm rock tone.
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 hottestsauce
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Date: October 26, 2003 @ 11:13 AM
It hot. The guitar in the beginning sounds a little off, what was that an ovation? It had a hollow kind of sound to it.
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ebarbarella
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Date: November 6, 2003 @ 11:45 AM
wow  this sounds really good!! I like a lot how the song flows !! Great track!
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Dizeazed
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Date: November 10, 2003 @ 3:02 AM
...Love it!
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 soundsseeker
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Date: November 12, 2003 @ 11:04 AM
 Very nice tune. right to the playlist
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autarch
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Date: November 24, 2003 @ 2:55 AM
I like this song a lot. It reminds me of a band (and a certain guitarist) that I really love. Very nice.
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BenRebel
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Date: January 2, 2004 @ 10:54 AM
Killer guiter I like the Flang/chours effect on the vocals the made me want to hear what else you got..
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RonMadore
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Date: January 2, 2004 @ 5:17 PM
Great effects on the vocals..... I can definitly see beyond the mix problems ya had, this song is one of my favorites since joining. Playlist indeed. Great Job on guitar solo too.
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pmscpc
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Date: January 7, 2004 @ 5:57 PM
I liked that...looking past the mix it's a well laid out song. 
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 kyodylee
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Date: January 15, 2004 @ 11:04 PM
People are mentioning Pink Floyd, but I hear John Lennon. Cool Tune. Thanks for the d/l.
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Ztakram
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Date: January 18, 2004 @ 5:00 PM
very nice. i realy like the singing. the cello sounds great. with a better production you've got a hit!
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LukeSteele
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Date: January 24, 2004 @ 7:25 PM
Nice tune and playing, the drums need to stand out more. Pink Floyd influence there and why not?
http://pentultima.dmusic.com
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ronnie71
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Date: January 26, 2004 @ 10:57 PM
This is fucking awesome.. omg.. great song.. love your singing.. really wraps around me and wont let go.. AWESOME.. the music is so great.. and the lead kicks ass.. thumbs up and Dplaylist for sure..
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kyodylee
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Date: February 5, 2004 @ 9:45 PM
coolsong.  |
EvilInfluence
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Date: February 17, 2004 @ 3:39 PM
nice clean sound itd be cool with a trippy guitar solo like floyd or something
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Gatherer
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Date: March 12, 2004 @ 10:49 PM
I know you like people to be honest...well, here goes, and I hope you're strong enough to accept my thoughts on this track....
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST SONGS I'VE HEARD ON THIS SITE! Beautiful melody, lyrics, guitar work; wonderful emotional vocals; great delivery!
I apologize again for not being able to offer any constructive criticism....  A++
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Pentacle
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Date: March 18, 2004 @ 6:45 PM
:Nice: I like this , very hypnotik
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rnowmusic
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Date: March 20, 2004 @ 1:00 AM
Pagan
Beautiful.
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DigitalCP2003
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Date: May 4, 2004 @ 11:22 PM
Dood this is great. I wish i stumbled on this sooner. I dig this alot.
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missLavey
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Date: May 22, 2004 @ 6:31 AM
Lovely voice. The strumming is quite intricate and passionate. I think that you have a nice sound going here, and you already know that. Good Job.
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AppleJuice
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Date: July 5, 2004 @ 6:22 AM
If you have heard Planting Seeds, I think you'd like them, you remind me a lot of them, very original lyrics, I like!
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AppleJuice
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Date: July 5, 2004 @ 6:23 AM
If you have heard Planting Seeds, I think you'd like them, you remind me a lot of them, very original lyrics, I like!
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imemine
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Date: July 13, 2004 @ 2:29 PM
Great feel with some well put together lyrics. The mix between clean and dirty guitars adds a nice timber to the mix. I really like your voice and how you have fit into a very defining style that is uniquely—well you. ! The composition is melancholic and heavy like a thick fog over a swamp at dusk on a muggy southern evening. Anyone for a Lemonade? My only suggestion, being that I am a bass player, is to add a little compression (3:1 perhaps with a quick attack and release) to tame, tighten and control the dynamics of the instrument. That will give you a rounder and more controlled bottom end.
I didn't get a chance to hear the first mix.
Over all I love the tune and can’t wait to hear more of your work.
RP of Ime Mine
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djfacemachine
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Date: July 22, 2004 @ 12:14 AM
ok, so, i started this song playing and i walked to the other side of my room to get something. then i stopped as soon as the track started. i had to sit down. jesus christ... this is THE BEST SONG i have heard in a long long long time.
there is just so much emotion in this song... it actually made me cry. its that good. i don't even really know what to say. the vox is so good. perfectly on key singing with a heartfelt beautiful melody. the backing track is warm and rich and melodic. everything blends together perfectly...
as soon as it was over i put it back on again. then when it finished that time i put it on yet again. i don't do that. ever. this is absolutely beautiful. you are very tallented. don't EVER shortchange yourself.  
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Maffmatix
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Date: July 22, 2004 @ 3:38 PM
Pagan... this really is a good song man. I took Face's advice and listended to it, and I am impressed.
Don't be depressed about losing the better version of this, I have had the same thing happen to me with half of a FILM once. But we got our shit together and re-did it and it actually came out better!!
Why don't you give it another try? You may surprise yourself. Anyways go get a deal now. A record deal.
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Solipsism
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Date: July 23, 2004 @ 10:11 AM
excellent track, it screams roger waters and pink floyd at you....an amazing song, great lyrics and music it really holds you in your place. Fantastic song 
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DeltaF86
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Date: July 23, 2004 @ 11:51 AM
Oh, Dj Facemachine was right. Very sweet song. It reminds me of Finger 11, Foo Fighters, Pink Floid, and some other song that I can't remember the name... anyway, very awsome
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ICF
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Date: July 28, 2004 @ 12:30 PM
Beautifull tune, very relaxing and emotional 
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zeropage
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Date: July 28, 2004 @ 4:32 PM
wow, awesome track! those chords are sooo kewl! it was a good idea to add some strings, sounds really nice
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smooka
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Date: July 30, 2004 @ 10:33 AM
your voice is excellent. love the intensity of this. lyrically on point too extremly strong composition.
the dirty solo is very well recieved.  purely amazing tune friend, F ya!
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 Emoceon
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Date: July 31, 2004 @ 2:58 AM
i don't like dirty solos, but i like the rest of it.
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CowgirlBebop
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Date: July 31, 2004 @ 10:44 PM
pink floyd, yes. but since i love pink floyd i LOVE this...woah...
downloading
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independentm...
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Date: August 1, 2004 @ 12:49 AM
Oh yeah, VERY good and yes, sorta floydish, but also hear other influences and styles. Rock on!
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 onewhodreams
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Date: August 2, 2004 @ 12:52 AM
 Great song, great lyrics, great vocals!
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StefanieNewport
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Date: August 11, 2004 @ 12:26 PM
I FREAKING LOVE THIS!!!! excellent Randy, i love dirty solos excellent track, excellent vocals and song writing top notch - impressed! - playlisted!!
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thought-fox
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Date: August 12, 2004 @ 11:10 AM
The voice, expression, melody and lyrics are spellbinding!  (Guitar's a little bit distorted?) I don't want to dampen my first reaction though. This is fantastic work!
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cosmicearthgirl
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Date: August 15, 2004 @ 6:16 PM
Once again, all my favorites rolled up in one killer voice. And the rest of the song lives up to the voice too!
Someone once said that when you hear a song that reminds you of something else, but you can't place what it is, that sometimes what you're hearing is so right that your mind plays tricks on you and you just think you've heard it somewhere before.
That perfectly describes this song for me. 
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Bogeylyn
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Date: August 16, 2004 @ 9:14 AM
 When a song has this many comments, I wonder what I can say that will express that however univeral this may be, it still reaches this one individual, and speaks to her life and to her feelings. It isn't just that I already want to sing with the wonderful melody... it's the emotions from you... to me... that transend any noteless language I might use to describe how it touched me. I'm grateful, that's all I can really say. 
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Pyro-of-The-...
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Date: August 31, 2004 @ 11:13 AM
cool song
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Pyro-of-The-...
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Date: August 31, 2004 @ 11:14 AM
cool song
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ryanwilliams
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Date: September 3, 2004 @ 3:34 AM
Awesome awesome tune, man. I really dig the cello..or anyway, what I assume is a cello. It helps round out the sound really nicely. The vocals are well done--in fact, everything is.
I liked hearding the "two, three four.." as hushed as it was. Even that seems to help round this tune out here. Excellent!
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Woof
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Date: September 25, 2004 @ 1:39 AM
This one reminds me a bit of why I liked Badfinger so much...
It's like, workingman's rock... something that speaks to, and for us (as Bogelyn mentioned)...
A strong, heartfelt track... thanks for this!
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Guitarman1977
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Date: November 9, 2004 @ 4:24 AM
very well done love the pink floyd vibe,vocals were great hell ya!!
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DeltaF86
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Date: November 12, 2004 @ 5:52 PM
Lol, it looks like I already commented on this one! IT STILL ROCKS!
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ShakerGreen
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Date: December 27, 2004 @ 10:56 PM
great song you got here dude! has a really nice groove to it, well delivered vocals!
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Notary04
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Date: January 29, 2005 @ 10:42 PM
Ah, nice folksy country intro. Just want to sway in a hammock with my big greasy barbeque turkey leg and tall glass of fruit juice. Gah, other than rather low quality recording, this sounds so freakin' pro. How long have you guys been a band? You play well together, there's a feeling of nearly familial closeness between all parts involved, like you've all been through so much together. Just beautiful. Nice use of panning and other effects toward the conclusion. Oh yeah, once again, you're vocals fade way too much into the background. I have no idea what the song's about! Oh well.
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Stercesderised
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Date: March 7, 2006 @ 3:17 PM
awesome feel to this toon; i like the vocals a lot. fantastic groove and feeling. great track!
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patrickbulch
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Date: May 6, 2006 @ 8:08 AM
Very original tune. Downloaded and burned a copy. Great sounding guitar!!
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freddemillio
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Date: July 28, 2006 @ 10:07 AM
Thick atmosphere created by the bass and the acoustic guitar. Nice composition. The instrumentation gels well with the .
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WM3
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Date: April 4, 2008 @ 4:07 AM
Beautiful piece here! awesome vocals! very unique voice,
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