 Jennae
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Date: March 13, 2003 @ 3:16 PM
pull them drums back, and bring that beautiful guitar up! Those drums are a distraction form this sweet melody! I am really enjoying your work!
You should really look into collaborating with fellow dm artist 
(hint hint)
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 GeneHilbert
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Date: July 8, 2003 @ 10:18 PM
Kewl tune - you write well - Vocal pitch and diction is good. The mix is ok, but Jennae is right about the drums, however... it's the rim shots, back it off -2 to -3db it is just a little hot. The bass drum is fine. The bass remind me of my '66 Fender Bass 5
- it sounds like a piano's low strings. Kewl tune - Good Job - LATER
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zique
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Date: July 15, 2003 @ 6:37 AM
Nice song!
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 Gatherer
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Date: March 13, 2004 @ 12:16 AM
Agree with Jen Scape Goat up there...in this case the drums are overtaking things. Your guitar picking is delicate enough in this song to come out and meld with your lovely voice. Again, beautiful piece!
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 DigitalCP2003
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Date: May 6, 2004 @ 2:35 AM
Great song. Dude great song.+
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djfacemachine
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Date: July 22, 2004 @ 1:20 PM
i really like the guitar on this song a lot. great vocal melody! i absolutely love it. this one is a little more upbeat than the others but still very heartfelt and emotional. great lyrics!
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 Cryxan
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Date: July 25, 2004 @ 6:52 PM
I love this one and it's one of my favorites from your whole page. Miss Facemachine up there twisted my arm to come and take a listen, and I'm glad I did. Your melodies are distinctive and this one especially is catchy. I like the bridge part (I think it's the bridge--I'm not a musician so I'm not sure). I'll also agree with Jen on toning down the drums a little, though. The guitar is good and I wish it stood out a little more.
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RedLevels
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Date: October 13, 2004 @ 1:16 AM
Pagan, this song is like a top 40 song man! represent!
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